A great number of people desire to move to a different country and start a new life. However this may not be as easy as they thought
What kind of problems do you think a person might experiences
Living abroad has both distressed sides and stimulating, impressive sides. When a person lives in abroad, should change and adapt himself/herself to country’s culture and their social values. This process is sometimes difficult to new comers but it is obvious that living with unfamiliar culture develop person’s worldview. These adaption periods, definitely depend on person’s character. Easy going ones or curious ones surmount this adjument era with less effort than other ones. This adjustment period contain couple of things. For instance, food culture, social values, behaviors and most important one person’s attitude to new culture.
First, all human beings feel uncomfortable when something distorts their living style. One of the these are living abroad. Living abroad means new life style, new friends having different sight to world and new food tastes. When adjusting yourself to new community, you prefer to keep away from everything to avoiding false imppresion and behaviors. Because your behaviour which implies good things in the hometown may implies bad things. For example, in Turkey a particular hand movement which mean food is delicious, thanks to chef stands for “Shut up!” in Asia Countries. Thus, new comers might be misunderstood by local people. However, easy going and open to learning person can surpass easily.
Each community has different food culture. For example, Indians love spicy meals, Japoanese food culture is based on fish and rice, Mexicans interest in hot and bitter meals. Because of this reason, new comers don’t feel familiar with these food and try to find their favorite foods. If you are curious of local foods and insterested in new tastes, in a short time you adopt yourself to new foods and cuisine.
In conclusion, everything has both good sides and bad sides. Living abroad is a good change to improve yourself and experience new things. Even if, adjustment period annoys nee comers, advantage of living abroad vary raging from making new friends to enlarging your vision.
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 67
- The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feathers, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feathers, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. 73
- How might the differences between online education and traditional education affect the educational experiences. State your position and support it with reasons and examples 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...voiding false imppresion and behaviors. Because your behaviour which implies good thing...
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...h mean food is delicious, thanks to chef stands for 'Shut up!' in Asia ...
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...sy going and open to learning person can surpass easily. Each community has di...
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...iving abroad is a good change to improve yourself and experience new things. Even...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44099378882 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69754777784 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60248447205 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9005827776 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6363636364 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157698419978 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482864696133 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376152699962 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094736870299 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333861992602 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.68 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.