How is your generation different from your parents’ generation?
The more our life becomes modern, the more young generations are different from the previous ones. It is highly believed that a new generation will bring to our life new perceptions about the world. Personally, I suppose that there are several differences, especially the balance, the lifestyle and love.
First of all, younger generations claim that everyone should have their own right in all aspects. For instance, along with the fast speed of social enhancement, women start going out to work at companies. Nowadays, they are no longer responsible for just managing the house, they can even take the responsibility for finding jobs to get money for their family. Moreover, the men have to share housework with their mother, sister or wife. Another example of this opinion is that everyone can express their feelings in spite of their sex. The men can cry if they feel sad and the women can encourage them. It is different from the older generation’s opinion that the men have to be strong under any circumstances to protect the women.
Secondly, it is not complicated to distinguish the lifestyle between young and old generations. The youngsters feel that getting tattoos or hair colors are not the standard to estimate someone’s personality. In contrast, in the past, it is supposed that people who have tattoos or hair colors are not good, they have bad behaviour and low knowledge. Furthermore, younger generations are keen on going out and having night parties with their friends. However, the previous generations think that it is a bad habit. It will negatively affect their health and annoy other people.
Finally, this modern life lets us know that love comes from our heart, not from our sexuality. In the older generation’s mind, the men just love the women and the women also just love the men. If somebody is different from this belief, they definitely have some problems with their mental health. On the other hand, the youngsters do not have the same view. They believe that mutual love is the best because nothing is more important than feelings.
In conclusion, although there are many changes from old to young generations, we have to respect each other. It is my firm conviction that not all the changes are good for our life, but some of those changes raise our awareness of the balance, the lifestyle and also the love between people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93984962406 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65352349287 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516290726817 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6605846335 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.6956521739 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.347826087 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91304347826 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142709343513 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458174479755 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610395032311 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887652002207 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456832889866 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.33 Out of 6
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