Leadership & Influence QuestionChevening is looking for individuals that will be future leaders or influencers in their home countries. Explain how you meet this requirement, using clear examples of your own leadership and influencing skills to suppor

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Leadership & Influence Question

Chevening is looking for individuals that will be future leaders or influencers in their home countries. Explain how you meet this requirement, using clear examples of your own leadership and influencing skills to support your answer.

(Minimum word count: 100 words, maximum word count: 500 words)

I was born in Kolkata but raised in the northeast with people of a different culture. Learning their ways and adapting with them was difficult for me. But I accepted the challenge by being the class monitor during my school days. Thus I was introduced to leadership at a tender age and had to manage student grievances and fulfil class resources. Hence, I see leadership as placing others interests above yours. This belief led me to donate blood in voluntary blood donation camp organised by State Blood Transfusion Council, West Bengal.

Being a member of All India Bank Employees Association, while serving in Bank of Maharashtra, I took an active part in fighting for the rights of our bank security guards, who were governed by a third-party agency. Promoting sustainable economic growth and decent work for all is the need of the hour for increasing employment opportunities and reducing informal employment and our strike was a testament to that.

While in college, we had to give presentation in groups. In these activities, I used to establish an understanding with my teammates which led to the task completion. Following this interest, I authored several papers during 2015-19, from which a paper co-authored by two more fellows, got selected in the International HR Conference on HR Trends 2030 organised by Indian Institute of Social Welfare & Business Management. During my presentation I justified to my learned audience from the industry and the academic world, the purpose of my paper. Lifelong learning opportunities and equitable quality education is a birth right of every human-being. Being a Chevening scholar I will enhance my learning opportunities and this in return will enable me to spread my experience in my country. Thus, inspiring and leading people towards quality education.

During my enrolment in Arena Animation in the year 2016 -17, I got an opportunity to represent my centre in Orbit Live 2017, which is an annual animation industry event held in Mumbai where delegates from several countries including UK, attended. I competed in the 3D Modeling category which needed dexterity with computer graphics software, cooperation amongst members of different ethnicity, decision-making for task execution and self-evaluation. This experience taught me cooperation both locally and globally among countries that made this event possible. This event showcased the involvement of developed countries towards better education of a developing country. I understand the necessary skills and leadership potential a Chevening scholar should have to lead and influence people. Revitalising the global partnership for sustainable development is an objective of Chevening Scholarship which it will accomplish by building public and civic leaders to reform and strengthen global peace, security and governance, thus increasing official development assistance. The UK government’s international development funding related to Strategic Partnerships for Higher Education Innovation and Reform is a key area I want to work on upon returning to my country and the Chevening experience will provide me the necessary skills and platform to showcase myself.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...he class monitor during my school days. Thus I was introduced to leadership at a ten...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, third, thus, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 35.0 8.3376753507 420% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2704.0 1615.20841683 167% => OK
No of words: 490.0 315.596192385 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51836734694 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19308260514 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 176.041082164 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565306122449 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 837.9 506.74238477 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.1338634524 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.909090909 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114398384475 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032783251939 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363947351382 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630578019827 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239738233548 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 163.0 78.4519038076 208% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.67 Out of 6
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