Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animal. Do you agree or disagree? Why?

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Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animal. Do you agree or disagree? Why?

It is undeniable that many dolphins are now being forced to perform in the circus. This fact has lead to a strong agument against for training dolphins for the performances since performing in the circus may injure these animals. To my point of view, I totally agree with this opinion.

Dolphins may suffer the harsh treatment in the cirus. Dolphins perform not because they enjoy, but because they are starved. Dolphins were starved until the show during which they were fed as a reward for their performance, and if they can not do the trick correctly, they will be beaten by whips and other weapons. Besides, dolphins injure themselves during the performances, and the chlorinated water worsens their wounds and also makes them slowly lose their sight. In some circuses, people even let the dolphins jumping through rings of fire, which can make their skins affected. Dolphins are “echolocators”, that is they locate objects by emitting sounds and detecting the reflections given back. When they are confined in a small pool they can’t use echo-location. And that is why circus is a very terrible place for dolphins since there are noices like the music, loud and foot-tapping. The loud noise is extremely harmful to the Dolphins which stresses them out. In additionally, is the pool, with its chlorinated water, was where the huge sea mammals should be in? Even people can not stay cooped up in a tiny room day in and day out. I once heard about the information that a mother dolphin in a circus killed her own child so that her child would not have to suffer horrible life in such a place. There are many ways to amuse ourselves other than seeing these lovely creatures performing in public, out of fear and hunger.

In conclusion, each person need to have an action in order to protect these creatures from being harmed. We can make a commitment never to patronise circuses, and ask friends and family not to patronise them either. Circus is nothing more than a prison for poor dolphins and other animals. Beating and using weapons with dolphins is nothing more than a crime. And this crime just can be stopped when people have the awareness of protecting dolphins by action.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 125, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ey enjoy, but because they are starved. Dolphins were starved until the show during whic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84840425532 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69312744492 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55585106383 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6432207043 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8095238095 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9047619048 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.80952380952 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27497603123 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775988202254 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735427834086 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204199543001 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103473155078 0.056905535591 182% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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