Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals. Do you agree or disagree? Why?
Nowadays, many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals. I love watching cute dolphins, but not in the circus. I feel very sad when the dolphins are injured. So, I agree with this! When the dolphins are trained, they have to perform what they don’t enjoy!
Although the dolphins are very smart, people who train the dolphin may get angry because the dolphins can’t understand them. The dolphins may be hit, may get hungry when they aren’t fed. More dangerous, the dolphins may lose their sight, may be stress because of the noisy crowd. So that, the dolphins may die, they may be extinct. People may be attacked by the dolphins when they feel unsafe and want to be free. The dolphins are the friends of us, so we shouldn’t harm them.
In short, the dolphins should live in their natural habitat!
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, i feel, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 41.998997996 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 151.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83443708609 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40431099742 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 176.041082164 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562913907285 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 506.74238477 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.5149511819 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355724971013 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161422294828 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.183045543956 0.0667982634062 274% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229717542098 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151696681427 0.056905535591 267% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 78.4519038076 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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