Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems and how could they be reduced?

I do not agree to the point, violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society.
Criminals are not influenced from TV and movies. Criminals are mentally unstable, they need help, they need love. Every person should take steps to help people in need. Your small step could save you and your family. Think about it, why would any sane person do such thing?

I live in North America, recently, lot of violent incidents happened. One common thread between all the criminals, they all mentally unstable and required help. Not all mental diseases are same, there are mainly two types. People who borned with and people who are brain-washed to believe in false image of the society. Later ones are more inclined to do criminal acts. People who watch violent movies and play violent games are not directly connected to the criminal activities.

Lots of people in society are living virtual life. Not many people care about what is happening around them. I think everyone should be concerned and aware. If you think, crimes are not happening near me and I am safe, then you are mistaken. In today's world humanity is fading away. We see old lady having trouble picking her groceries and what we do? Take pictures, really? Our hands should raise to help, not to make fun.

In conclusion, I think TV and movies do not increase crime in the society. It is everyone duty to help humanity and spread love.

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