In modern era, criminal justice and technologies are rapidly advancing. Some may argue that trends of globalization increase crime. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, globalization is one of the biggest phenomenon of the world and it has a big influence in justice. Through globalization people all around the world become connected to each other in all aspects of life, economically, culturally, technically, politically. As the world becomes more closely, crimes become easier to commit. However, technology and criminal justice are rapidly advancing. A lot of systems are invented in order to prevent the increment of crime. As a result, there are a lot of advantages and disadvantages of globalization.
Firstly, crimes have always existed but there was no developed criminal justice to investigate those crimes. Trends of globalization brought the opportunity to investigate and to deny people who commit crimes. The evolution of technology directly affects the way the criminal justice system operates at fundamental levels. A wide range of technologies are employed in support of the justice system, including telephony, database management software, computers, automobiles, and weapons (Thomas Holt,2014). The adoption and implementation of technology also directly shape the policies and practices of the justice system. For example, the development of modern communications and transportation technologies, in the early 1900s, increased the response capability of police and changed citizen calls for service. Computers and cellphone technologies have increased the capacity of data processing, information sharing, and communications within and across agencies.
Secondly, robots, GPS systems, high-powered computer systems, GDS system, ALPR cameras have improved investigation, surveillance, and analysis procedures. One of the most important technological tools in the field today is the computer database. There are now database systems for DNA testing and profiling, fingerprints and “hot spot” crime mapping programs (Jennifer Doleac,2016) . A few decades ago, everything was written down in files and information was difficult to exchange between different countries and states. Now it’s universally accessible thanks to computer databases. For example, fingerprinting is much more advanced than it was ten or twenty years ago. There are image enhancement systems to make prints clearer; there are biometric tools that more efficiently analyze fingerprints, and there are portable tools that allow officers to take prints in the field.
Furthermore, officers use GPS in so many ways, from getting to a scene using the most effective route to pinpointing where a suspect is located. Gunshot detection system (GDS) is installed in high-crime areas and helps police quickly detect where any gunshots come from. Automatic License Plate Recognition (ALPR) is now camera inside of police cars that can automatically run every single license plate the camera sees. An officer immediately sees if the car is stolen or if the driver has warrants out for his or her arrest.
An another system which helps the criminal justice in Albania is the Total Information Management System(TIMS). It is a computer system linking all border entry points, police stations, prosecutors-essentially all of Albanian’s law enforcement community. It is a very important and effective system in Albania. For example it was a valuable proof when the court was investigating the case of one of the ministers of Albania, Sajmir Tahiri (Besim Hajdarmataj ,prosecutor,2017).
On the other hand, as the world is changing and advancing with technology, criminal organizations are taking advantage of new opportunities. The advancement of travel, ease of communication, and an increase in demand, have all contributed to the globalization of crime. Every nation has been affected by the globalization of crime and the problem continues to grow. The UNODC analyses a range of key transnational crime threats, including human trafficking, migrant smuggling, the illicit heroin and cocaine trades, cybercrime, maritime piracy and trafficking in environmental resources, firearms and counterfeit goods (United Nations Office on Drugs and Crime). The internet has facilitated the widespread growth of fraud. In many developing nations, especially African, no restrictions exist to combat fraudulent activities.
In conclusion, regardless of the disadvantages of the globalization, it is a key point to the prevention of crime. To my opinion, criminal justice and technologies have discouraged criminals to commit crimes. Thus, technology and globalization play a pivotal role in the justice system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 10.4138276553 317% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 41.998997996 193% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 8.3376753507 336% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3876.0 1615.20841683 240% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 669.0 315.596192385 212% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79372197309 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.08576781939 4.20363070211 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38562474142 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 372.0 176.041082164 211% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556053811659 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 1249.2 506.74238477 247% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 16.0721442886 230% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2702625438 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.756756757 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0810810811 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75675675676 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197249587855 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507278622355 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660537478042 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102831090142 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077027383029 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 232.0 78.4519038076 296% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.33 Out of 6
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