MY FAMILY
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to introduce my family. There are four members in my family, including my father, my mother, my brother and me. My father’s name is Thien. This year my father is forty seven years old. He works at a construction company in Long An. My father looked older than his age because he had a lot of gray hair and wrinkles. My father is a great man who has always taken very good care of my brother and me. Talk about my mother, her name is Hang and she is forty-five years old. My mother used to trade fish, pork and vegetables at the market. That's why she has a tanned skin. My mother working at a clothing company now. In general, my mother is a gentle woman and sometimes quite fastidious. Besides, another man who I love so much is my brother. His name is Phong. He is twenty-five years old. Now, he is living and working in Ho Chi Minh city. The last person in my family is me. I am studying in the third year of Civil Engineering major at Can Tho University. I and my brother rarely see each other. We have a busy lives in day. However, in the evening we always make video calls together. I really love my family, and I hope that we are always. I understand that there is nothing that is more important than my family. I love my parents and my brother so much.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-04-23 | PHAN ĐOÀN PHƯƠNG MAI | 100 | view |
| 2020-04-20 | Nguyễn Thành Chung | 63 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: forty-seven
...s name is Thien. This year my father is forty seven years old. He works at a construction c...
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Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: THE_SENT_END[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'An'?
...works at a construction company in Long An. My father looked older than his age bec...
^^^
Line 1, column 563, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ish, pork and vegetables at the market. Thats why she has a tanned skin. My mother wo...
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Line 1, column 1040, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'life'?
Suggestion: life
...r rarely see each other. We have a busy lives in day. However, in the evening we alwa...
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Line 1, column 1245, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... that is more important than my family. I love my parents and my brother so much....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, look, really, so, third, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20161290323 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36908801941 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560483870968 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 5.43587174349 386% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8437080539 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 45.3043478261 106.682146367 42% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.7826086957 20.7667163134 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.30434782609 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 3.4128256513 469% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465341256921 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142875558431 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130675709709 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.465341256921 0.151304729494 308% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.7 13.0946893788 28% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 11.3001002004 42% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.9 12.4159519038 48% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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