My favourite market.
I like going shopping in the market in my hometown. It's name is Rung which is traditional market. It's in the center of my town and it takes ten minutes from my house to there by motobike. I often go to Rung market with my mon and my brother. The market is always noisy and busy from early in the morning until six o'clock in the evening. It's quite big and large with two floors. On the first floor there are many stalls. They sale housewares, toys for children, spicy for cooking,... This floor is not too noisy because it doesn't have many custumers. The next is the second floor, there are many fashion shops. They sale clothes, shoes, cloth and jewellery. I love this floor because it looks so beautiful and fascinating. Most of my clothes are bought in there. They are quite good, cheap and suitable with my style. Around the market it's really noisy especially in the morning. You can heard alot of sound from people and vehicles. Many people from other places of the town come to sale their goods so that goods are very deverse. You can buy evething you need such as vegetables, fruit, flower, seafood, many kind of meat, spicy,... My mom buy food in there everyday because they are fresh, delecious and safe. Besides the price is not too expensive and sallers are friendly. In addition, I love eating some special cakes in Rung market because of their good taste. When I go to university, I don't go to market very often. However, when I come back home I go there every morning with my mother. It's so funny when I see my mom chooses food and bargins with sallers. I also can learn more experients to choose nutritionous food with a suitble price. Sometimes I fell quite tired when I go to market especially on Tet because it's has many things must to buy. And I must carry all of them for my mom. It's very heavy but it doesn't too big matter. I love shopping and I accept that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...me is Rung which is traditional market. Its in the center of my town and it takes t...
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Line 1, column 315, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...usy from early in the morning until six oclock in the evening. Its quite big and large...
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Line 1, column 479, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...es, toys for children, spicy for cooking,... This floor is not too noisy because i...
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Line 1, column 523, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... This floor is not too noisy because it doesnt have many custumers. The next is the se...
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Line 1, column 888, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'hear'
Suggestion: hear
...oisy especially in the morning. You can heard alot of sound from people and vehicles....
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Line 1, column 1107, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
... as vegetables, fruit, flower, seafood, many kind of meat, spicy,... My mom buy food in t...
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Line 1, column 1131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...lower, seafood, many kind of meat, spicy,... My mom buy food in there everyday bec...
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Line 1, column 1161, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...eat, spicy,... My mom buy food in there everyday because they are fresh, delecious and s...
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Line 1, column 1396, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... good taste. When I go to university, I dont go to market very often. However, when ...
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Line 1, column 1746, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ally on Tet because its has many things must to buy. And I must carry all of them for m...
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Line 1, column 1822, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... them for my mom. Its very heavy but it doesnt too big matter. I love shopping and I a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, look, really, second, so, well, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38395415473 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27390210497 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518624641834 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 5.43587174349 350% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.4034806198 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.7586206897 106.682146367 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0344827586 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.48275862069 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 3.4128256513 469% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265402458487 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761911328965 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941099637115 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265402458487 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 13.0946893788 40% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 12.4159519038 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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