My Personal,Social and Academic Culture Shock Experience
Coming to Kenya felt like the beginning of new and exciting experiences for me. I was so anxious and I could not wait to be in Kenya.
On arrival at the Jomo Kenyatta International Airport,Nairobi everything around me looked and felt different I didn't feel normal. The way they dressed and communicated with each other using Swahili being unable to comprehend what they were saying I started feeling left out. What felt more worse was I couldn't still understand the way they spoke English because their accent was different which I later realised that the kikuyi's pronounce "l" as "r" that is pr...
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Evaluation for the last four
Evaluation for the last four paragraph:
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 27 15
No. of Words: 525 350
No. of Characters: 2384 1500
No. of Different Words: 280 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.787 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.541 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.658 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 163 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 117 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 79 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.444 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.946 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.294 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.398 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.115 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 436 350
No. of Characters: 1961 1500
No. of Different Words: 246 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.57 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.498 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.509 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 125 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.964 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.375 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.316 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.514 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.125 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5