Nothing last forever, Creative Writing.
The moon, lake and beach with big waves that always greeted me when I saw them, as if telling to remember the old memories that walked very sweetly like the world was sprinkled with flakes of sugar every step of the way. They managed to get My Brain to play the memory like a video that is played to watch again.
Initially I did not know when the feeling started but I was touched when he saw me unlike no other. Unexpectedly, the two humans were united in a bond called Love. I'm blue and he's a rainbow that always shines all the time. Where is the rainbow who always knows that it must come when the rainstorm ends. Just like he who already knows that there is a beautiful rainbow around him but that beauty is covered by a blue taste, that is me.
But sometimes there are not always two rainbows that decorate the sky, sometimes the rainbow isn't there when the rain passes. That is also how our relationshop. We can still complement each other, he taught me to always be strong and be myself who is always cheerful because actually I am a sun shrouded in black mist. Seeing what we have been through for hundreds of days and thousands of hours, several films and dozens of songs that accompany our relationship makes my heart always belong to him. Hope that time and distance will always espouse us so that in the end we will always on the same path.
In the end it was all just an expectation made by my heart. My soul that is too thirsty and hoping he was just for me. Beautiful blue sky can not notice we will always be together. Time always played with our encounter which seemed funny and ended tragically. The place cannot allow us to look into each other's eyes even in just 2 seconds, the wind that blows does not convey that I really love him. Until everything realized me that nothing lasts forever in this world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'remembering'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'tell' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: remembering
...eeted me when I saw them, as if telling to remember the old memories that walked very sweet...
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Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... two humans were united in a bond called Love. Im blue and hes a rainbow that al...
^^
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ns were united in a bond called Love. Im blue and hes a rainbow that always shin...
^^
Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: he's
...ed in a bond called Love. Im blue and hes a rainbow that always shines all the ti...
^^^
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ainbow that always shines all the time. Where is the rainbow who always knows that it...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...decorate the sky, sometimes the rainbow isnt there when the rain passes. That is als...
^^^^
Line 7, column 402, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Until” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...does not convey that I really love him. Until everything realized me that nothing las...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, really, second, so, still, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 27.0 7.30460921844 370% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37134502924 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17485883301 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9617903475 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0555555556 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0332330968498 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0164037530768 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676344065922 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0222818765762 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385933423179 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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