The number of elderly people in the world is increasing. What do you think are the positive and negative effects of this trend? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The number of old people has increased steadily in recent years for many countries. Scientists have predicted that there would be fewer youth than old-ages in near future. This increasing has both negative and positive effects in one’s country. This essay is going to cite and discuss some of these effects.
Increasing the proportion of old persons has some positive effects in societies. They have a lot of experience in life and this can be applied for guidance of younger generation. For example, when youth are faced with problems, they seek advice from someone much elder than them. In addition, some professions like teaching, research and politics require extensive experience and the old-age pensioners in such countries can contribute to these occupations. Besides, elderly persons are the witness of history and they can reveal the past to younger people more than others.
On the contrary, in some communities, old-age persons are considered to be burden especially in undeveloped countries and those nations where people suffer from poverty. Most of elder persons in such areas don’t work. Likewise, with more elderly, the cost of nursing care increases. Moreover, there are not enough younger people to earn money and pay the taxes. Furthermore, after a certain period of time for working, old persons have right to receive retirement salary from their government. And all above-mentioned concerns add pressure to economic of each country.
Considering all the issues, though it has some negative results, it may seem older people can be helpful for every community. But if the number of them reaches to an extreme proportion, then it’s a bad sign for the new generation as well as the senior citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in addition, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26978417266 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75081093858 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607913669065 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7470931864 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1764705882 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141323703477 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475143936076 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371119195939 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918816026218 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210399890701 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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