Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea, some think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?
Today, when you buy something in every market, super market, fashion store or shop the seller with give it to you along with a plastic bag and sometime even two. Plastic bag is really cheap and useful and we easy accept it.
Plastic bags are made from oil. With the development of technical we are easy make plastic bag with big quantity. The plastic bag quantity is getting bigger and bigger and their price is getting cheaper and cheaper. We easy throw away it after use it because it really cheap and we have made a serious problem.
Plastic bag is really cheap and useful but it is really dangerous for environment in everywhere it is thrown away. Plastic bag have a dangerous problem that it really hard is decomposed. To decompose a plastic bag we need the hundreds years and it make pollution for every land, river, beach, sea where it is thrown away. Every year we have the million ton of plastic bag in the sea and we know that million sea animal such as turtle, whale, fish and sea bird is died by plastic bag.
We must to have solution to resolve plastic bag problem, now. Many countries banded the plastic bag and single use plastics. in some country, they must not use plastic bag in shop and super market and have high tax when you use plastic bag. I really agree with banning plastic bag solution and want we have to recycle them because after all we have just only Earth and must to protect our planet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'uses'?
Suggestion: uses
...nd cheaper. We easy throw away it after use it because it really cheap and we have ...
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Line 9, column 249, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...c bag we need the hundreds years and it make pollution for every land, river, beach,...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and sea bird is died by plastic bag. We must to have solution to resolve plas...
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Line 13, column 4, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... bird is died by plastic bag. We must to have solution to resolve plastic bag pr...
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Line 13, column 126, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...he plastic bag and single use plastics. in some country, they must not use plastic...
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Line 13, column 370, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...e after all we have just only Earth and must to protect our planet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, so, after all, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50574712644 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13688022625 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1156491425 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246304895085 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10696916958 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584742952628 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164268714384 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443262224869 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.