staying healthy
Staying healthy
Hello everyone. My name’s Thanh. I’m 10 years old. I’m in class 4 Dong son number 1 primary school. Today I’m going to tell you about staying healthy.
Health is the most important thing in a human’s life. When we have health, we can do other things in our life.
Do you know how to stay healthy? Think about the exercise that you can do and the food that you eat. Exercise and the right food help you to live longer.
First, we will learn about organs inside our bodies. We have the stomach and the intestines. They break down food so we can use the food. The liver and kidneys take away the things that our body doesn’t need. Your bones are very strong. The bones protect important parts like the brain and the heart. The skin protects our body, and they keep our body at the right temperature. Your lungs help you to breathe. Your muscles help you to move. Did you know we use 200 different muscles to move? Your brain moves the blood and your brain makes different of your body work well.
Now, let talk about how to stay healthy. There are four things you need to do to stay healthy. They are food, exercise, wash, rest and sleep.
First is food. We need to eat healthy food like fruits and vegetables and food that has vitamins, fiber, proteins, calcium, and Carbohydrates. Water is also good for you. They keep you to stay healthy. You shouldn’t eat junk food like soda, …
Next is exercise. You can do exercise like swimming, … When you do exercise, you breathe faster and the muscles can get the oxygen they need. When you work hard your muscles can’t get all the oxygen they need. So you can only run for a short time, this makes your muscles bigger.
Now, let go to wash, there are microbes on your hands. Some of them aren’t dangerous, but some can make you sick. So you need to wash your hand before you touch food after you go to the toilet, …
Finally, we have rest and sleep. You need to rest after you work hard. You need to rest because our body needs time to repair our muscles and to make them bigger. You need to sleep too because you grow the most when you sleep, so it’s important to sleep well.
Now let go to how to stay safe from coronavirus. You should talk to people that you don’t know, they may have coronavirus. You must were a mask when you’re outside. You must have personal hygiene so you don’t get dirty. So that is the end of my presentation. I hope you learn some things from my presentation. If you have any questions, I’m here to answer all your question.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 86.0 24.0651302605 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2087.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 473.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41226215645 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11966514968 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446088794926 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.60771543086 75% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 28.0 5.43587174349 515% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 45.0 16.0721442886 280% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1587367083 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 46.3777777778 106.682146367 43% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.5111111111 20.7667163134 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.2 7.06120827912 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 8.67935871743 265% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 18.0 3.4128256513 527% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100958968569 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436430869591 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115684434349 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600588282599 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700715748904 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.6 13.0946893788 35% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 95.17 50.2224549098 189% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.5 11.3001002004 22% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.82 12.4159519038 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.8 8.58950901804 68% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.0 9.78957915832 31% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 3.0 10.7795591182 28% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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