testimony
I am Emily. I grew up in an atheist family. However, I could sense the emptiness deep in my heart, which the atheism could never satisfy. I was eager to seek the purpose of life. I did not find the answer until I met a British lady who invited me to study the bible with her in 2011. She introduced to me why God exists, why there are lots of sufferings in this world. Interestingly, I realized that she was a Jehovah's Witness after I came to the U.S.. It is undeniable that this experience opened the door for my faith in Jesus Christ. Afterward, I came to study at the University of Cincinnati in 2012. From then on, I was busy with my life and school, so I did not seek God until 2013 I met two girls who came to me to invite me to join their bible study. So I started studying the bible with them and I got to know who Jesus is and Why he came to this earth to sacrifice himself on the cross. Gradually, I was more interested in Christ. One month after I studied the bible with them. I was persuaded to get baptized. Nonetheless, I did not exactly know about the meaning of baptism and the meaning of following Christ at that time. Later on, I quit that group and met two leaders of the International Christian Fellowship group, UCWF, who were the first one told me that the core of Christianity was to have a personal relationship with God. My knowledge of Christ and the bible and my faith has also been growing during those almost six years in that group. Nevertheless, I had confusion about my baptism and was still not quite sure about my salvation. I was also not wholeheartedly to God until God took away the relationship which I thought was the most significant thing to me at that time last year. Since then, I have truly understood that my Heavenly Father is the only joy and satisfaction of my life.
I am also thankful to God that the self-quarantine at home because of the Pandemic has provided me a wonderful opportunity to spend more time alone with God, I also thank God also for bringing me to the Primitive Baptist Church so that . Because of these things I have been through, I am certain that I have fully accepted that Jesus Christ was my only Savior and Lord. Therefore, I have decided to get baptized again here. Hence, I commit myself to Christ and his people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 451, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...Jehovahs Witness after I came to the U.S.. It is undeniable that this experience o...
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Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... to the Primitive Baptist Church so that . Because of these things I have been thr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, still, then, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 76.0 24.0651302605 316% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32790697674 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59839243389 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495348837209 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 5.43587174349 423% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.7659160022 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5416666667 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 12.4159519038 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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