Topic 7: write a letter to yourself of the year 2070.
Cantho12th,January, 2022
Hi Nhu of the year 2070,
How are you doing? How is your little family doing? I'm glad to have a chance to write this letter to talk with you.
It's yourself, 21 years old and You know how old are you? You are under 70s. You know why I chose this topic? because I really wanted to write something like this a really long time ago and now I have a chance. I really don't want to be serious but I'm going to ask you some questions.
The first question is " Are you happy?" At the age over 60, “Is there anything you regret the most?” About me, I dream a lot about my future or our future. I thought of it in many different ways. Certainly, I'm kind of lost and I hesitate a lot. I don't know why, but I believe that you won't like me. I know that after graduation, I’m going to do everything by myself and it will be hard, however, with all my belief and myself, I will do it and you will find out when you see this letter.
The second question is "Are you still following our dream?" If you don't, it's fine. Day by day, time by time, everything is complicated, so I won't blame you but if you do, I hope that you won't disappoint me. I trust you. I believe that you listened to a lot of bad things or some critics around you. So do I, but you know, I will make our parents proud of us. Trust me.
Finally, I hope that you are happy with your decision, you are happy with your family and everybody around you. You have to respect every small thing around you. I know that you can take care of people at that age. I’m not going to ask about our parents because I know we will have a hard time.
Don't worry myself, I am keeping this letter and I will send it to you. In 2070, you have to read it and reply to me.
Best wishes,
Nhu.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ary, 2022 Hi Nhu of the year 2070, How are you doing? How is your little fa...
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...doing? How is your little family doing? Im glad to have a chance to write this let...
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...to write this letter to talk with you. Its yourself, 21 years old and You know ...
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...r 70s. You know why I chose this topic? because I really wanted to write something like...
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...ut Im going to ask you some questions. The first question is ' Are you hap...
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...uture or our future. I thought of it in many different ways. Certainly, Im kind of lost and I ...
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...ill find out when you see this letter. The second question is 'Are you sti...
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...still following our dream?' If you dont, its fine. Day by day, time by time, ev...
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...ake our parents proud of us. Trust me. Finally, I hope that you are happy with ...
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...cause I know we will have a hard time. Dont worry myself, I am keeping this let...
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..., you have to read it and reply to me. Best wishes, Nhu.
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...d it and reply to me. Best wishes, Nhu.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, really, second, so, still, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 92.0 24.0651302605 382% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.06818181818 5.12529762239 79% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25753444644 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488636363636 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 5.43587174349 405% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2699658057 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.28 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.08 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.12 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0853145928758 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296174587548 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497328288139 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075105847282 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847764067463 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 13.0946893788 37% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 50.2224549098 165% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.73 12.4159519038 46% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.77 8.58950901804 67% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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