There are various solutions to resolve traffic jam which is known as the heating issue in our country. First of all, increasing the use of public transport is an essential action. As we know, the more private vehicle is utilized, the more overcrowding situation become. So, public transport helps us to improve air and space quality on the street. Secondly, problems in rush hour should be monitored and controlled seriously. The number of transportation flocking out significantly in certain time leads to out-of-control traffic. Therefore, it should be built CCTV or other similar things that assists police observe clearly and solve dilemmas in time. Lastly, It is crucial to raise people awareness. Because perception results in action. Educating knowledge and understanding about traffic plays a fundamental role in lessening risks in congestion enormously. For example, they comply with the law by stopping when red signal appears increasing risks of not only traffic jam but also accidents. To sum up, if we know how to take advantage of public transport, keep rush hour issue in balance and increasing awareness, traffic obstruction can be enhanced considerably.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 184.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36413043478 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00235710016 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.728260869565 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0816974225 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.25 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175937701034 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512657732427 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476492280316 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175937701034 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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