[Transport topic] - Transportation system and infrastructure.
Talk about the city has been improved for the recent years
Transportation in my country is improving rapidly in terms of both quantity and quality. Especially road traffic is growing significantly but some of the roads are still dangerous and slow to travel due to outdated design and an inappropriate traffic mix. In recent years, the construction of expressways has accelerated and air travel is also the most important for long distance travel. Metro systems are under construction in the two cosmopolitan cities of Viet Nam, Ha Noi and Ho Chi Minh city.
Talk about the transportation system faces problems
No doubt in my mind, some routes are quite slow to travel and still dangerous due to outdated design and an inappropriate traffic mix. The public transport like buses hasn't accommodated sufficiently for a rapidly growing population, leading overcrowded buses and not particularly punctual. Suffering congestion during the peak hours is the result of excessive motorbike usage in my hometown. Air pollutant caused by Gas Guzzler can be an issue, particularly in summer.
Talk about the transportation system should be improved.
In my opinion, my city should consider improving infrastructure capacity by constructing elevated highways, ring roads, outer belts and widen roads. By doing so, not only could we ease the intensity of traffic jam but we could also affect positively on the economy, obviously in the logistics industry.
Following that, the city may offer some free buses which encourage people to curb their private transport.
Finally, some of the traffic inspectors should impose higher fines if people don't obey the traffic rules
Talk about transportation will be in the future
I imagine that vehicles of the future will be energy efficient and emission-free. A lot has been said about traveling by driverless cars, which I believe would be incredibly convenient and safe, especially for a disabled person and drunk. Another option could be to travel by electric means of transport like electric buses, motorbikes... There are also different ideas about how technology can be used to assist drivers and to help them navigate bad weather or predicted accident situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, still, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39142857143 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99110108727 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585714285714 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.269459134 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.9375 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168550704922 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638775810151 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797666542747 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111618877704 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112346335583 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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