Very people lives in the same home their entire lives. What causes people to move to new homes either in the same city or in different parts of the world?
Typically, very few people live in the same house their entire lives nowadays, so they make the decision to move to new homes all over the country. The factors that determine whether people move to new homes either in the same city or in different parts of the world, such as their ages, personalities, or development opportunities.
In the first place, people chiefly live in a specific place which is compatible with their ages and personalities. For instance, young people frequently prefer to live in the crowded , modern places to be more suitable for fun and entertainment. Therefore, they can have a chance to gain more practical experiences in their lives. On the other hand, the elderly generally would like to choose somewhere which is quiet and comfortable for perfectly relaxing.
Furthermore, another factor that determines to move to new homes is the development opportunities in their jobs. It is fairly common to relocate for a new job in another city or country due to their sources of income. For instance, people might find out a better occupation, which could earn a competitive salary in particular. Besides, they would also have more not only good but also supportive relationships in their jobs.
Taking everything into accountant, the two principal factors to move to new homes are the ages as well as the personalities, and the development opportunities. Not all people will move their homes, but they must consider about this. Someone moves to new home, thereby reaping the rewards of this. In other words, people could easily take lots of advantages of just moving to the new homes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in particular, such as, as well as, in other words, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0447761194 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89649053376 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559701492537 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2715676972 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437735750429 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143996893106 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128214844745 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275743052019 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186194934389 0.056905535591 327% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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