The use of animal in the scientific research is common fact from long era .A life of animal is needed for the welfare of human being but the welfare of ecosystem is not to be neglected on the basis of scientific research . It is known to all that the pyramid of ecosystem is structured with all living things. A scientific experiment depends on trial and error method and it , therefore,is essential to use living things as a part of experiment.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: jesy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 364.0 1615.20841683 23% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 80.0 315.596192385 25% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.99069756244 4.20363070211 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78540429686 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 52.0 176.041082164 30% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 118.8 506.74238477 23% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.2395669337 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270089557713 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141919758072 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126210447245 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270089557713 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 78.4519038076 24% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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