Why is participation in this program important to you?
Southeast Asia Youth Leadership Program is an opportunity for me to have a bigger view of the world and lend a hand to the process of developing humanity.
First and foremost, it allows me to represent Vietnamese students and deliver our own opinions on national as well as global issues so as to help give solutions and make contributions to our communities. As this program is held by acknowledged organizations such as ASEAN and the United States Department of State, our messages can reach a larger audience and have a significant effect. Consequently, this might become a motivation for other Vietnamese young adults to take part in similar projects and impact our society.
Another reason is that this program provides me with a suitable environment to approach different aspects of life and connect with unique individuals from various regions and areas. Hence, I will get the chance to receive valuable lessons from seniors and peers on this journey, which can help improve my knowledge and skills and work on my shortcomings to become a bright individual. Furthermore, we can introduce Vietnamese culture to other participants and get to know the beauty of other countries as well.
In conclusion, SEAYLP is a crucial event to me and it will be my honor to participate. It is undeniably a precious chance for me to be among helpful and potential leaders of the world.
- During this exchange participants will act as ambassadors for their countries What qualities do you have that would help you fulfill this role 75
- Why is participation in this program important to you 59
- How do you think ASEAN can help your country address a challenge such as climate change creating new jobs or health issues in the 21st century 100
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98268398268 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00315607679 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.0088819046 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.888888889 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2222222222 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119504967857 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044044581296 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362103538858 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0606598126403 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412517704464 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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