Write about a country you love
Since I was a kid, I had an opportunity to approach Japanese culture through the internet, comics and films. Furthermore, Japanese was one of the main subjects that I had learnt at school. With all those reasons, I have been dreaming of a trip to this beautiful country someday.
The geological structure from thousands of islands makes Japan a unique country in the world’s map. Due to the extent of islands from the north to the south, this country has different climates in each region, a wide range of biology and a diverse cuisine. Hence, each area has its own attractiveness to draw the attention from tourists when they decide to travel to Japan.
There are three cities that I want to travel to the most are Tokyo, Kyoto and Osaka. The reason why I choose these cities is because each of them represents a particular aspect of Japan. Tokyo is the capital with a modern vibe. Kyoto is the ancient capital with a traditional impression. Osaka is a large port city. I believe that if I come to these cities, I can gain knowledge and experience Japan in a fullest way. Beside that, despite the different vibe of each city, the common thing between them is that their cuisines are loved by a lot of tourists. I am not an exception. Each time I see an image of Japanese food on the internet, my desire to travel to Japan becomes stronger than ever.
Since Japan has been one of the most complicated countries to apply for a visa, it is difficult for me to get there right now. There are various tours with tour’s guide from travel companies. This type of travel helps tourists easier to get access to Japan without the difficulty of getting a visa by themselves. However, the tour’s plan is usually fixed with many activities in a narrow time. Therefore, with a tourist who wants to have a slow and relaxing trip like me, it will be more suitable if I become a backpacking traveler. Although It is hard for backpacking tourists to get a visa to Japan, especially those who come from Vietnam, I am still working on a plan to make it happen soon. I hope that I can achieve my plan in the near future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...a. The reason why I choose these cities is because each of them represents a particular as...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... gain knowledge and experience Japan in a fullest way. Beside that, despite the d...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51436031332 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57205999947 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54046997389 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1009967115 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5909090909 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4090909091 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.40909090909 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0547545116848 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0145517155536 0.084324248473 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270180619417 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0357164506965 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179231576902 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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