Write about a place you visited when you were a child. Answer these questions:
where did you go?
when did you go there?
what happened?
would you like to go there again?
In my childhood, I had traveled many places. And in all of these places, the most memorable place to me is Son Doong cave. Son Doong is the largest cave in the world, and it places in Quang Binh district. I went there when I'm fifteen and it's so magnificent to describe about that. Son Doong is the newest cave that man ever discover. And because of no interrupt by human, it has it own ecosystem with giant river, jungle inside the cave,... During the trip, I had a chance to swim follow the river to go deeper in the cave. The deeper I go, the more I see beautiful scenery, also I realise that how people are destroying the enviroment. It's such an amazing trip and I hope one day I can go back there again
- Write about a place you visited when you were a child Answer these questions where did you go when did you go there what happened would you like to go there again 38
- Write about a place you visited when you were a child Answer these questions where did you go when did you go there what happened would you like to go there again 68
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... Quang Binh district. I went there when Im fifteen and its so magnificent to descr...
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Line 1, column 383, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'owns'?
Suggestion: owns
...use of no interrupt by human, it has it own ecosystem with giant river, jungle insi...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...with giant river, jungle inside the cave,... During the trip, I had a chance to sw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 570.0 1615.20841683 35% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 137.0 315.596192385 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.16058394161 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 4.20363070211 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30908575659 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 176.041082164 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671532846715 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 185.4 506.74238477 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.7798572934 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.3333333333 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.2222222222 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 7.06120827912 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101273578884 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389929829691 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318956619667 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101273578884 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 13.0946893788 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.26 12.4159519038 50% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 78.4519038076 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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