Write a description of the perfect place to study
Appropriate educational environment can assist students in focusing and performing better. Therefore, a flawless location to hit the books plays an integral part .A vintage coffee shop is one of the best choices which students can opt to study.
When people hear of coffee shop , they tend to think that it is just a place for friends gatherings or having fun. However , the cafe is also an ideal place for any learners . From the outside , vintage coffee shop looks like an nostalgic venue which might bring you back in the old days . The feeling of tranquility and calmness already spread through your mind. Even though , some vintage coffee shops appear to have obnoxious noise but all students need to do is searching for a suitable place.
Inside , there is a great deal of antique furniture such as cassettes , pictures , paintings and so on. Desks and chairs are made of iron wood with dark brown or light brown color in order to remind people about the way that our ancestors used to live. Besides , the inside is frequently filled with shimmering lights and cool air from air-conditioners as. Students can feel comfortable and completely at ease.Some vintage cafes are equipped with pianos or amplifiers which generate several melodic non-lyrical songs.Sipping some tea or coffee accompanied with soft instrumental music is by far the best for studying. Also ,the serenity that it offers is a cut above the rest .Moreover , you can take many mates there to collaborate with and have discussion together. What a rare chance , isn’t it ? .
To sum up , people have a tendency to choose different locations to study ,but a vintage coffee shop is probably one of the best choices. The place where most learners feel relaxed and peaceful at the same time. It gives us an opportunity to temporarily escape from the hustle and bustle of city life as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90415335463 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68432440041 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642172523962 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9430535085 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0600640035712 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0210891615167 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031787855918 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0390869172132 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391795752593 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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