Write a letter to your oldest friend. Tell her what you miss about her and share some memories and stories.
Dear Tony
It has been a really long time since we last saw each other at high school. I can't believe that it's been six years since I last saw your face or heard your voice! I am sorry for not being there in real life when it mattered the most. I miss you so much right now and want to recall all priceless memories from those times we spent together.
How have you been, Tony? I hope you are doing well. I have been teaching for 5 years since we graduated. Every day, seeing my students doing all kinds of school stuff reminds me a lot about our high school time. After all these years, the memories about you and me were still clear, sometimes I feel like it just happened yesterday. Remember when we first met, I was 17 when I saw you in the library looking for a book. Somehow, we ran into each other and fell to the floor. It was not a nice beginning, but then we found out that we were finding the same book. We spent hours talking about that book and other school things. As time went by, we became close friends and started going to the same university. I really missed the old crazy things we did there: from when we had to burn the oil midnight for exams, from singing karaoke until 3 am, from studying in the library after school and also making fun of each other all day long. You were always so amazing to me. You always knew what was going on with me and always knew how to work things out without having to think about them for too long. For me, it's not the same thing with my other friends. It's hard for them because they don't know what I'm going through or what they should do to help me out.
So I just wanted to tell you that no matter how many months or years go by, nothing will ever change how much I care about you and how much I miss you. And that if there's anything that can bring us back together, then please let me know because this distance is too hard for me to carry on my own anymore...
Love always,
Rima Hải Yến
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 79, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e last saw each other at high school. I cant believe that its been six years since I...
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Line 2, column 235, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...in real life when it mattered the most. I miss you so much right now and want to ...
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Line 3, column 1108, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... think about them for too long. For me, its not the same thing with my other friend...
^^^
Line 3, column 1185, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...friends. Its hard for them because they dont know what Im going through or what they...
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Line 3, column 1200, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...rd for them because they dont know what Im going through or what they should do to...
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Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...ou and how much I miss you. And that if theres anything that can bring us back togethe...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'Love'.
Suggestion: Always Love
...d for me to carry on my own anymore... Love always, Rima Hải Yến
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, really, so, still, then, well, after all, i feel, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 24.0651302605 291% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.09635416667 5.12529762239 80% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.87039183439 2.80592935109 67% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.60771543086 75% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7910217574 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9047619048 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124026627138 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393827400028 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368911046116 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912809979054 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00853984380188 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 50.2224549098 173% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.5 12.4159519038 52% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.05 8.58950901804 70% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.