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Write a letter to yourself

Dear myself,

Are you okay now, do you still think aimlessly, stay up late, or be sad about things that are not worth it? Do you still miss the things that belong to the memory? Now, do you have a job or are you still pursuing what you love? She still tries every day to fulfill his entrepreneurial dream or is still struggling to find his own way, cheap to a job she never expected. This year's me is a realistic person but a dreamer, I always have false hopes, I always expect too much from myself, I am a soft-hearted person. Therefore, I hope you are a person with a strong will, a will that is not easily discouraged by anyone, I hope you will have a mature head, bravery in how to deal with your situation. I want you to be stronger, more aggressive, not afraid of the problems that life has entrusted to you. I want you to know to accept failure as an inevitable part that you have to go through because life is a series of experiences and only with many experiences can you become an adult. You are a music lover, of course you also know that a good piece of music not only has high notes, but those low notes and low notes will help your soul have space for your own thoughts and thoughts. As for a great picture, it will be impossible without the dark rams, standing next to it will highlight the bright colors. If you are struggling not knowing where and how you are going, gradually I will show you. Although the waves of youth are always fierce and harsh, I hope you will firmly steer the boat forward to the future. Now, I hope you don't give up, if there are times when you feel like disappearing, put your faith in yourself because sometimes adults like me can't avoid getting hurt. Whether life is bitter or sweet, you are still living it. Everything in the world has a meaning, so keep dreaming and don't be afraid. Are you at any stage of your life, even though you can't escape the pain, but keep a smile on your lips to show me, keep living well until you become an adult like me. I can't give any advice because I'm just like you. Just try to fix the things that are still within reach, don't let the regrets pile up.

Love, Mia.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear myself, Are you okay now, do you still think aim...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...way, cheap to a job she never expected. This years me is a realistic person but a dr...
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Line 3, column 1334, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[2]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to know'.
Suggestion: to know
...right colors. If you are struggling not knowing where and how you are going, gradually ...
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Line 3, column 1532, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... forward to the future. Now, I hope you dont give up, if there are times when you fe...
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Line 3, column 1658, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...urself because sometimes adults like me cant avoid getting hurt. Whether life is bit...
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Line 3, column 1801, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rld has a meaning, so keep dreaming and dont be afraid. Are you at any stage of your...
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Line 3, column 1868, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...any stage of your life, even though you cant escape the pain, but keep a smile on yo...
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Line 3, column 1986, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ll until you become an adult like me. I cant give any advice because Im just like yo...
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Line 3, column 2015, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...like me. I cant give any advice because Im just like you. Just try to fix the thin...
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Line 3, column 2089, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...the things that are still within reach, dont let the regrets pile up. Love, Mia.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, well, as for, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 24.0651302605 278% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21844660194 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22610265666 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529126213592 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9690937347 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5555555556 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00891542891471 0.244688304435 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00315227858034 0.084324248473 4% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0133739853621 0.0667982634062 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00894327868326 0.151304729494 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 12.4159519038 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, well, as for, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments