Write an opinion paragraph about the disadvantages of using mobile phones.
Nowadays, mobile phones are useful, but it also has many disadvantages. First of all, using too many mobile phones will make us less focus on study. Students take their mobile phones to chat with friends, play game and watch movies instead of using them to study. Moreover, people will be distant from others. When we hang out with friends or spend time playing with family, everyone uses their mobile phones, and no one talks to others; that thing makes us feel terrible and not close. Finally, using mobile phones is not suitable for your health. If you use a mobile phone every day, your eyes will be short-sighted, and even you can be blind. You can get headaches when you mobile phone for a long time. In conclusion, you should sensibly use your mobile phones to make your phones have more advantages.
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| 2019-12-24 | vohuyen6900 | 75 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 41.998997996 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 665.0 1615.20841683 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 142.0 315.596192385 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68309859155 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26227393489 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676056338028 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 506.74238477 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1124417592 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8888888889 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163432736391 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802175084824 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365541917869 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163432736391 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 78.4519038076 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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