Write a paragraph about the reason why children should be encouraged to do household chores.
Whether children should do housework or not is one of the most hotly debated issues nowadays. Opinions on this subject are equally divided. However, I firmly believe that children should be encouraged to do household chores as soon as they can do so. The first important reason as far as I'm concerned is that getting children involved in doing domestic duties can teach them a massive set of life skills that will benefit their independent life in the future forever. The one thing that they all need to learn is how to run a home. After all, they all have to live somewhere. They, therefore, need to understand how to clean, how to cook, how to shop, how to budget, etc. For this reason, in their future, things will be much easier. They can prepare for later life only by doing suitable household chores. The second reason is that asking children to help with housework can teach them a sense of responsibility. In a family, every member has to do their job. For example, the father and brother are in charge of fixing things while the mother usually does the shopping and cooks. Therefore, children should give a hand to express that they are responsible and independent of parents. Children can divide their free time into two parts. They should spend only 30% of the free time on entertainment, and the rest is for doing domestic duties. They can manage both studies and household chores efficiently. This teaches them how to become qualified people and know their responsibilities in family and society. Others who do not agree point out the potential danger involved in some household tasks. This cannot deny, but we have to remember that most task assignment is appropriate with parents taking into considerations children's age, experience and current skill level. Also, parental guidance is available if children need help. Some others do not approve of this arrangement say doing housework takes up much time of children. However, children can control their spare time reasonably. They know how to make a distribution of time spent on their homework, entertainment and domestic duties. Therefore, time doesn't have an effect on children's responsibilities for doing housework. In conclusion, children need to do household chores. This will undoubtedly bring many benefits to them in many ways. Parents should also consider the ability and age of their children to make an appropriate task assignment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, after all, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2007.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99253731343 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74495358412 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514925373134 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4200307839 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3333333333 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8888888889 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256477654353 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784566074928 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832978179264 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256477654353 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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