write a paragraph with at least 100 words about your closest friend

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write a paragraph with at least 100 words about your closest friend

I am lucky enough to have a lot of friends. Of all my friends, vi is the closest friend with me. We have been friend since we were in primary school and until now it has been 9 years. He is an intelligent boy and especially humorous. Thanks to his character, he has brought a lot of fun to everyone around him and not accept me. We are not the same class but we usually study together at home. So we are always side by side. I strongly believe that we will be friend forever

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 380.0 1615.20841683 24% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 95.0 315.596192385 30% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.0 5.12529762239 78% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.12198564135 4.20363070211 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28956442651 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 176.041082164 40% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.736842105263 0.561755894193 131% => OK
syllable_count: 122.4 506.74238477 24% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.3773004836 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 47.5 106.682146367 45% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.875 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.875 7.06120827912 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.096370449448 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425824820943 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614563508505 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096370449448 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.4 13.0946893788 26% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 50.2224549098 171% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 11.3001002004 35% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.03 12.4159519038 41% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.68 8.58950901804 66% => OK
difficult_words: 9.0 78.4519038076 11% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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