You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around the city.
Write a letter of application to the tourism office.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Cuong. I'm studying at Moscow University in tourism. I've seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around the city and I was so excited at that time. Fortunately, I have spare time at the weekend now and I desire to challenge myself as a tour guide to improve my tourist skills. I'd rather guide English or Russian speaking visitors. I'm a talkative, attentive, hard-working and open-minded person, so I think I would suit this job. When I was a schoolboy, I've hosted many surfers to my beautiful and ancient city - Hue. I've been hanging out with a large number of foreigners, so I'm quite confident that I will do it well. I appreciate it if you can lay believe in me.
I hope to cooperate with you, Cuong.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 625.0 1615.20841683 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 140.0 315.596192385 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46428571429 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80571535082 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 506.74238477 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5600875272 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249888797382 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802993140219 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127655267385 0.0667982634062 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151540672055 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975441625081 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.