advantages or disadvantages of living in era in which new technology are constantly being invented.
The discussion on advantages or disadvantages of living in era is debatable topic and people around the globe are divided in their arguments. The subject attracts majority of view from people and remain a hot topic among people of concern. In this essay I shall scrutinize both points of view by providing same relevant examples and explanation before drawing any conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this arguments but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that now days new technology is increasing time by time which is more fine. Another pivotal aspect of this arguments is that 80% people do work on smart phone and they are time save. There are so many type of beneficial new technology. Needless to say, all these merits stand on a good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that human can do many task flexibly using their body and simple tools but inventions eventually make them forget that usage their body. Besides, 60% children use to smart phone with this put bad effects on eyes which is not good. Hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of living in era is best in human life are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawback should not be overlooked either,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.964 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63704379941 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2394219003 50.4703680194 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.416666667 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168279069926 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533955750556 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645844224505 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899859403201 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303868443381 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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