In the contemporary world, the progression of new inventions and their related effects has sparked a heated debate. While proponents assert that there are numerous benefits of these inventions the disparate envisage a list of disadvantages pertaining the invented commodity or service. This essay will scrutinize some of the benefits and disadvantages of the New Invention named as Television.
On one hand, there are myriad of arguments that demonstrate advantages of this media screen, in which the most preponderant one is that now a days lots and lots of educational programs are telecasted on daily basis which helps improve the knowledge of children and adults alike. Besides, it is a source of entertainment for majority of the house wives which seldom move out for recreation. For instance, National geographic is a 24/7 informative channel that explores world and takes you to the boundaries of world with a click of a remote button. Therefore, it very evident that benefits of this amazing box are many.
On the other hand, some pivotal aspects of the argument depict numerous disadvantages of this electronic device including a greater trend towards sedentary lifestyle. Probing further, this trend leads to countless social and health problems. For example, depression and anxiety are the by product of sedentary lifestyle that television has gifted us. Consequently, it is clearly visible that the over attachment with this device can lead to serious repercussions.
To recapitulate, TV is undoubtedly the most phenomenal invention of the century and where it is beneficial in countless ways; I consummately believe that it should be limited to few hours to stay away from the harms it can do to the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27536231884 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05627915283 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597826086957 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8766968735 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120275011381 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393976549686 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455488388537 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694256495707 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569628041039 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 55.0591133005 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.