In this contemporary world, the progression of getting married before completion of studies and before settling down and its related effects has sparked a heated debate. While proponents assert that this should not be a problem as it unites the people and families can be supportive to each other both morally and financially, the disparate envisage a complete disaccord with this disposition. This essay will scrutinize the reasons why marriages before time can lead to financial and social problems.
At the first place, there are myriad of arguments in favor of my stance in which the most preponderant one is that marrying someone increases number of dependents on you. Meaning thereby, there are more mouths to feed, child delivery expenses, additional expenses of medical and garments that puts an individual into a financial distress until he is well settled and out of his studying mortgages. For instance, George came under the bar of huge debt due to countless responsibilities he had to fulfill along with his studies as he got married at an early age. Therefore, it is quite evident that marriage before studies can lead to serious consequences.
On the second place, another pivotal aspect of this argument is that marriages before settlement can cause plethora of social issues. For instance, John was hospitalized for sleep deprivation as he was under immense pressure of fulfilling family requirements and he worked overtime for a continuous stretch of time. Consequently, it can vividly be seen that social and health depravity is very common in individuals who marry before settlement.
To recapitulate, the disadvantages of marrying before studies far outweigh any advantages that some people may argue. Therefore, I consummately believe that marriage is an affair associated with educated and well settled person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, may, second, so, therefore, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34020618557 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96843174333 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625429553265 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3289859973 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152363088976 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593653206248 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616071959822 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890493557967 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352281923209 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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