It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job? Do you agree or disagree?
These days, there is a controversial debate between members of society about the impacts of early marriage. There are a number of people who interpret the impacts of such marriages as thoroughly constructive, while others hold an opponent’s view. I am inclined to believe that marriage after education and acquiring a job is more beneficial and should be promoted.
There are several reasons why delayed marriages are advantageous. First of all, it is argued that education and job play a pivotal role in creating adroit people. This is attributed to the fact that such practices equip a person with a more well-rounded perspective of life; therefore they would create a feeling of accomplishment and confidence which consequently open avenue to new achievements, so that a youngster’s enthusiasm and determination will be amplified toward many daunting tasks. Specifically, a research study conducted by Yale University has found that experiencing work environments before marriage could enhance a person’s intellectual abilities to make decisions related to family and personal.
In addition, it is claimed that those couples who got married before finalizing their education and possessing an appropriate job are more struggling financially compared to the others. This is to say that being financially independent would instill strong feelings of self-esteem in individuals so that they are more expected to perform up to expectations in arduous situations that would take place in a marriage. Take child care for example, even affluent couples have to do uphill struggle to afford the expenses which are posed on the family.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that marriage after completing studies and establishing in a good job would enhance the quality of living for young couples and increase their life-satisfaction. It is expected that the youngsters take cognizance of the facts provided and begin to adopt this lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 5.94088669951 252% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1207.87684729 139% => OK
No of words: 304.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53289473684 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30567065038 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615131578947 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 379.143842365 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.9609506579 50.4703680194 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.166666667 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0948463753781 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318521600346 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424719567679 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585058227649 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362810973917 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 12.6369458128 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 55.0591133005 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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