Artificial intelligence and robots are increasingly being used to replace human jobs. Some believe that robots will eventually take over all our jobs. Which sentence do you agree with?
In this present millennium, people rapidly sophisticated with technological development. In the past, before the onset of technology man performed all functions manually. Employers were used human resources which were freely and inexpensively available. In present, most of fields were invaded by machineries and computers whilst these advancements also narrow the scope of employment in the country.
Dramatically, Computers and machinery help perform tasks speedily and accurately thus, these are increasing the quality and quantity whilst achieving maximum in the minimum time frame. Moreover, employers liked to researching different type of new technologies because they need to do their work in easiest way. Furthermore, many affluent countries robotic technology is vastly developing and they are fast replacing computers and machineries in many fields such as automobile industries, child care and health care. Unfortunately, globalization was spreading all over the world day by day but this innovation mostly affected in the developing and less developed countries because these countries have huge non-employees in this time. Moreover, all manual functions were dropped down slowly. According to this advancement, employers don’t want to retrained employees and it can work continuously. on the other hand it was becoming profit to the company.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with this statement because in the future and even now technological developments were invaded all corners in the world. Thus, people can’t neglect these fast changes whilst it’s probably affected to the employees because people were losing their jobs due to artificial intelligence. In this rapidly evolving era we need to have adjusted with this development because in the future robots have been created to be more user-sensitive and create on simple commands.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-09-11 | Dinuka Dissanayaje | 55 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 267, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the fields') or simply say ''most fields''.
Suggestion: most of the fields; most fields
...nd inexpensively available. In present, most of fields were invaded by machineries and compute...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the easiest'.
Suggestion: in the easiest
...gies because they need to do their work in easiest way. Furthermore, many affluent countri...
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Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...easiest way. Furthermore, many affluent countries robotic technology is vastly developing...
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Line 3, column 903, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...employees and it can work continuously. on the other hand it was becoming profit t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80434782609 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13940442018 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5566749484 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10701262957 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352744426172 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277559874923 0.071462118173 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737956998604 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00997042979775 0.0609392437508 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 11.5310837438 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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