The birth rate in most developed countries begins to fall and ageing increase. What can be done now to deal with this situations?
Recently, the phenomenon of increasing ageing by the birth rate and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of complex procedures is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly constructive and consequently positive by a substantial number of individuals, I am inclined to believe that falling the birth rate can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a general standpoint, the birth rate falling in the most developed countries can provide a society with some noticeable impacts which are rooted in the fact that crucial issue, as well as ultimate outcomes, are bound up inextricably. According to my own experience when I was a university student, I performed an academic research and I discovered the current policies. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both common phenomenon and accordingly complicated processes apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of a public arena, begging to fall the birth rate might increase the consequence of critical issues. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university asserted that the downsides of creative processes is correlated negatively with vital issues. Thus, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of this remarkable phenomenon.
To conclude, while there are some compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of increasing the birth rate far outweigh drawbacks, not only due to the advantages of this unique phenomenon prove the significance of total outcomes, but also pinpoint thorny issues’ potential implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, apparently, but, consequently, if, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6015936255 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2298350446 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629482071713 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0502495204 50.4703680194 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.222222222 104.977214359 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 20.9669160288 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250411065448 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891042949313 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063986462781 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135804703886 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519388503566 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 12.6369458128 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 53.1260098522 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.95 8.32886699507 131% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 55.0591133005 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.94827586207 196% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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