The claim that animals have “rights” has been the subject of much debate since the 1970s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned? Do you agree or disagree?

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The claim that animals have “rights” has been the subject of much debate since the 1970s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned? Do you agree or disagree?

Submitted by Azzita on Thu, 02/15/2018 - 06:19

Nowadays, captivity of animals in zoos has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether zoos helping or hunting our animals?”. It is a widely held view that zoos must be supported to preserve the endangered animals, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.

To begin with, it is a common belief that providing special places as a zoo for animals play a vital role in the fast-changing world. To put into consideration, I express several reasons to support this idea. First and foremost is that the threatened animals are enjoyed proper welfare including, the spacious surroundings, well-looked after, and well-fed. Secondly, people will get familiar with rare diversity and exotic animals as well as learn how to preserve or value them as well as they are educated how to treat animals to prevent the extinction. In addition to this information, a group of scientists, working at a prestigious university conducted that the survival of endangered animal by breeding in a suitable place, such as zoo will be preserved.

However, there is no doubt that building zoo provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that it is not the right of the human to capture animals and deprive them of their freedom. Moreover, they assumed that not only the animal species would not be preserved, but also their life will be under threaten.

To recapitulate, I entirely agree that zoos as a proper place for animals must be supported and reformed. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...captivity of animals in zoos has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06506849315 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9089578134 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4999183006 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.25 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 7.25397266985 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290281055922 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993069650056 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768610815916 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173495716729 0.151781067708 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478630427595 0.0609392437508 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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