The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since 1970s. Are zoo helping or hurting our animals? Should zoo be banned? Do u agree or disagree?
In the competitive world, zoos play an important role in saving animals. Zoos are the place where animals can find good shelter and food. Some people believes that zoos are helping the animals and save them from extinction while others argues that animals are affected menataly by keeping animals in a closed place.
In my opinion, animals should be kept in the zoos to be saved from any harm that can be done by people.
First of all, zoos protect the animals from the wild animals. Many animals became extinct as they were living in the same place with the wild animals like the dinasours, elephants and many other type of animals that are not exisiting anymore. Nevertheless, the animals will reproduce more when they feel that they are safe and that they are not exposed to any surrounding harm. Some animals are treated as business as they are showed up to the hunters so that these people get benifit from their fur or leather that cost too much money.
Second of all, the students will have better opportunity to study live what they took in their lessons and to check the type of the animals and the difference between different species, not only through books.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that zoos are very pivotal to animals lives. Zoos are saving the animals from extiction, exploiting from hunters and also aiding the students in their studies.
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- The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems... so who do u think should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organisations or each individual? 77
- Assessment/Assignment for Final Exam? 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, while, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84166666667 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29115145724 2.71678728327 84% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545833333333 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3077257138 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.636363636 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275651197872 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123657454849 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598713463047 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168419306566 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618512102084 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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