Climate change is huge concern in today’s world. Discuss about the roles that Government, corporates and individuals can play to improve it.
Nowadays, climate change has become a huge concern among people especially scientists all around the world, which leads to a moot question " who is responsible for this?". It is a widely held the view that the government must be held responsible for the problem mentioned above. while I tend to believe that the solution requires both legal actions of higher authorities and individual decision.
From a social point of view, there are several reasons why I believe that the government plays a pivotal role to reduce climate change. First and foremost is that governments are recommended to impose more restrict legislations on sectors and factories which release more carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. In addition, the government must focus to produce the more green source of energy which is environmentally friendly. Thus, there is no doubt that the more renewable energy produces by a government, the less gas fume we are.
However, needless to say, that, individuals are the other side of the coin to solve problems of climate change. In other words, although nations are supposed the key factor in this problem, the influence of the people should not be underestimated. For example, a group of reputable conservationist, working in a prestigious university, conducted a survey among different countries to find the relationship between climate change and using private cars by people. The result revealed that those who use less private cars, their countries were three times cleaner and faced with fewer problems directly related to climate change. Hence, if individuals are encouraged to use more public transport, the will sharply reduce climate change in the globe.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that the significance of the climate change must be taken into consideration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...nsible for the problem mentioned above. while I tend to believe that the solution req...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, no doubt, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32867132867 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96039682093 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601398601399 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.092840535 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.230769231 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175327889714 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567157822365 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582881333043 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983952829844 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359716858018 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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