People's opinions differe as to to whether or not company's top level authorities should take employees suggestions or ideas to make any decisions. While there's are some strong arguments againt the idea that top level managers should not take ideas from thier sub-ordinates, I strongly believe that top level authorities should accept the lower level employee's suggestions.
Top level employees must take suggestions and ideas from their low level employees to make the company better place. Because, some time the ideas from the low level workers is more significant than the suggestion from a top level employee. For instance, as per the recent reports, XZY company is the best company as it received a significant advice rom a lower level employee.
Moreover, peace can be maintained when lower level employees suggestions heard by the top level managers. These days, its common that peace within the company is not maintained due to the differences between the employees. For example, an Australian company have a rule in their organization to listen to all their employees to maintain peace within the company.
In conclusion, this essay discussed how a company can be made a better and peaceful place when the managers take ideas from their team-mates. In my opinion, top level authorities should take lower level employee's suggestions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27906976744 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81134224413 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 139.433497537 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502325581395 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6364981445 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.559034680791 0.242375264174 231% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.256513677282 0.0925447433944 277% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.193128764351 0.071462118173 270% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.370572056381 0.151781067708 244% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179392555991 0.0609392437508 294% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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