Company Top level Authorities should or should not take employees suggestions or ideas to take any decisions. Discuss
People's opinions differ as to whether or not company's top level authorities should take employees suggestions or ideas to make any decisions. While there's are some strong arguments againt the idea that top level managers should not take ideas from thier sub-ordinates, I strongly believe that top level authorities should take lower level employee's suggestions. This essay will discuss the reasons why top level employees should take ideas and suggestion from their employees.
Top level employees should take suggestions an ideas from their low level employees to make the company better place. Because, some time the ideas from the low level employees more significant than the suggestion from a top level worker. For instance, a company from the USA received a significant advice and suggestion from a lower level employee. Thus, ideas and suggestions from a low level emoplyee is considered good and can make the company a better place to work.
Moreover, peace can be maintained when lower level employees ideas and suggestions heard by the top level managers. These days, it's common that peace within the company is not maintained due to the differences between the employees. For example, an Australian company has rule in their company to listen to all their employees to maintain peace within the company.
In conclusion, top level authorities should take ideas and suggestions from their employees in order to make the company better place and maintain peace within their company. In my opinion, top level authorities should take lower level employee's suggestions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
Peoples opinions differ as to whether or not companys top level authorities should t...
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Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...s or ideas to make any decisions. While theres are some strong arguments againt the id...
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an idea' or simply 'ideas'?
Suggestion: an idea; ideas
...level employees should take suggestions an ideas from their low level employees to make ...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oyees to make the company better place. Because, some time the ideas from the low level...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.336 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72416152238 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 139.433497537 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416 0.580463131201 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7095436536 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.166666667 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.603349026649 0.242375264174 249% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.304203544591 0.0925447433944 329% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189947517523 0.071462118173 266% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.439499794411 0.151781067708 290% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.204856358389 0.0609392437508 336% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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