In the past 100 years, there are many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers. What do you think is the most important invent for the past 100 years? Why?
Researchers are successful in inventions of antibiotics, airplanes, and computers in the past century. People's opinions differ as to whether or not the computer technology is the best invention compared to others. While there are some strong arguments against the invention of computer technology, I firmly believe that it has transformed human lives in many ways. This essay will discuss the importance of this technology in detail.
There is a myriad of reasons why the advent of the computers bring a whole lot of change the way the businesses work. Firstly, computers play a significant part in growing any business and help spur the start-ups. As a consequence, the companies benefit from the new innovations of technology upgrades. Apple, for example, has admitted that it has improved it's earning using the computer technology. Thus, computers are advantageous in a variety of ways.
In addition to helping companies, computers transformed the way we work, travel and communicate. It intricately involved in all aspects of our lives. For instance, most of the public use the computers to book their ticket for their air travel. In spite of these arguments, some people might promulgate the idea that computer technology is superfluous. However, I do not agree with their assertion as they are invalid.
In conclusion, computers play a prominent role in changing the way the businesses function and transformed the way people live. In my opinion, computer technology is the best invention of the past century.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
...e past century. Peoples opinions differ as to whether or not the computer technology is the best inv...
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Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: WHOLE_LOT[1]
Message: Use simply 'lot'.
Suggestion: lot
...why the advent of the computers bring a whole lot of change the way the businesses work. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27572016461 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.022924374 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567901234568 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5635696598 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.125 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1875 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123905352277 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451473511272 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600075176339 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829007873874 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539261950348 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.