Dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping etc. and whether you
support them or not.
The importance of the dangerous sports activities like extreme skiing , bungee
jumping which was always debatable, has now become more controversial.
The substantial influence of extreme dangerous sports activities has sparked
the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on dangerous activities
in recent years. It can be said that good sports activities will improve the
personality of the individual , however some people claim that these sports are
unsafe and risky. This essay will elaborate how extreme sports or dangerous
sports activities are providing personality improvement and how dangerous
activities are harmful and thus will lead to logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why dangerous activities are good
for person but the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that dangerous sports
activities are good to play and improve the personality. Moreover , these
variety of sports are safer but also gives relaxations and entertainment. For
example , by successfully facing up the challenges in dangerous activities like
bungee jumping , extreme skiing people will overcome with their fears.
Therefore , dangerous sports activities are playing a vital role now a days.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks, which can certainly overwhelm
the potential impact of the dangerous activities but the most alarming one lies
in the fact that dangerous activities are harmful and risky. Furthermore , these
extreme sports are having higher level of risks and there are always a
unfortunate events that will happen. For example , more number of students
were died in bungee jumping. Therefore dangerous activities can play a role
on person.
Based on the above mentioned facts , it can be concluded that the impact of
the dangerous activities is prominent although the way idea extreme sports
activities should be well handled.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73943661972 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91661739646 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482394366197 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2885413485 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.384615385 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.12807881773 606% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275667702675 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124020866041 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778676233833 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974457696846 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795388632087 0.0609392437508 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 64.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.0 Out of 90
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