Discuss whether design of a building has a positive or negative impact? Which way can it effect work and life?
In the modern era, it is an irrefutable fact that the architecture of building impacts human life. Some people are in accord with the conception that design of a building, whether at home or in the office, greatly impacts life and work ethics of its inhabitants. My further upcoming paragraphs will unfold the reasons for having good architecture.
To begin with, good design ensures good health of its inhabitants. A good architecture of building comprises of good ventilation, proper sunlight and regulated indoor temperature. Air ventilation and proper sun light helps promotes health of the occupants by keeping the harmful bacteria and toxic indoor gases at bay. Moreover, open and colourful spaces help to uplift people's moods. Furthermore, good architectural design also promotes business by making greater profit margins while attracting more consumers. In addition to this, good architecture of office building also promotes overall health of the employees by ensuring good ventilation and adequate amount of sunlight. Hence, it could be clearly interpreted that good design is beneficial to human health.
On the contrary, poor design of a building impacts human psychology negatively. Closed confined spaces, dampness and over sunlight exposure in a building leads to deterioration of health of its inhabitants. For instance, the red houses built in London experienced a decline in the number of occupants within a year of its construction due to poor ventilation. As per recent research in America, almost 90 percent of people spend time indoors. Therefore, it is crucial for people to feel content in the building they are in whether at home or at work.
To recapitulate, after deliberating on all the aspects, it is an undeniable fact that design of a building does impact human life. Therefore, emphasis shall be laid on proper architecture of building as it ultimately affects the overall health of its inhabitants.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...itants. A good architecture of building comprises of good ventilation, proper sunlight and r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 31.9359605911 160% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 306.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3431372549 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04150767466 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542483660131 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.457006415 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1764705882 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178235054806 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065026053193 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680295727057 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135255881848 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556154704975 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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