Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of products?” Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
Over packaging is a serious problems because it requires a vast amount of natural resources to be made. It destroys trees, hence causing deforestation. It is a worldwide issue, however only few people care about it. It is safe to say that it is the entirely responsibility of producer to avert extra packaging.
First of all, it is known that some goods require a more protection than others but, it does not mean that they should be over packaged. For pericible products, for example milk, yogurt and others derived from milk, they ought to surely be taken with great care, due to goods validation. However, for many others, it is not necessary a high protection only because they are considered non-pericible, clothes.
Moreover, producers need to produce less packages but stronger ones. It leads consumers to using only enough packages to pack goods and carry them home safer. It is definitely a win-win process which both parts do not eradicate the natural environment.
Finally, we can see around the world that many producers are not aware of over package, and we had better advocate them to evade it because it is up to them to stop packaging.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'problem'?
Suggestion: problem
Over packaging is a serious problems because it requires a vast amount of na...
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Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... however only few people care about it. It is safe to say that it is the entirely ...
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Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun packages is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
.... Moreover, producers need to produce less packages but stronger ones. It leads co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, however, moreover, so, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 1207.87684729 79% => OK
No of words: 197.0 242.827586207 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86294416244 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7199881319 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634517766497 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0585866295 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0909090909 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134077048196 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048785976317 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428239702567 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762297643165 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394121944483 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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