The statement could be true and I totally agree with that statement. The place where the people born can be influenced to do better in his/her throughout life. The people are connected with the place where they born from mentally, emotionally, spiritually as well as physically. The memory where they played and grew can help them to grab the new achievements.
If I present an example of a sportsperson, he/she would be well known about the playground for playing the game because they grew there from their childhood. The culture can also help people to make a good human and getting new achievements. The people around us which motivates us to do new things. As we know, people can support if they know from childhood. the familiar place can give more confidence for people to achieve new accomplishments.
However, if people start their startup from the new palace they could acquire the new concept, new relationship and chance of exploring new demand for a new place. If people are going through the demand for the new place they definitely get more than his/her born place.
to conclude that, the born place can help to explore people fast but startup from the new place can give the ideas to explore new thing in human life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o do better in his/her throughout life. The people are connected with the place whe...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lly, spiritually as well as physically. The memory where they played and grew can h...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: The surrounding people
...ood human and getting new achievements. The people around us which motivates us to do new things. As...
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Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...an support if they know from childhood. the familiar place can give more confidence...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...y get more than his/her born place. to conclude that, the born place can help ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82242990654 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60155761375 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 139.433497537 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495327102804 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 379.143842365 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 8.0 1.56157635468 512% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.998842574 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134897673282 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656522949918 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587809516657 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970287930833 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698258326692 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.1260098522 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.32886699507 85% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 55.0591133005 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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