Effective learning is requires times, peace and comfort, and should not to be mixed with employment. Study and employment do not go hand in hand. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
The contemporary world of human lives is shaped by latest trends and approaches. Whether, effective learning should require times, peace and comforts with mixed employment study has been a moot point of discussion. Before coming down the conclusion, I would like to list down in my words on this specific topic in my forthcoming paragraph.
To begin with, everyone wants to get high study and get a high level job. Apart from this, student select more effective way to learn more things and want successful and fulfill their goals. But some of financial problem they start doing part time jobs.
However, we can say experience is good for job but being a student it is first duty to only focus on their studies. Due to this some students get high job and continue their study. For example, one of my friend he continue study and do job and earn good income, while she get a good experienced from the company.
Furthermore, some students do job and it impacts their study, and due to this they lose their knowledge. Once a student should get higher academic he will definitely work with, reputed companies or firms where he can gave their best. Moreover, early development sometimes become disappointed to the students. In my opinion student should do first study and after finish he should go for job.
After pondering over great deals and deliberations, I have come to the conclusion that, it is good to get higher job but if you complete your study with motivationally and interestingly yow will definitely become an efficient employee to your company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, apart from, for example, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86842105263 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65948947702 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597744360902 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9889261813 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189278384983 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068366656293 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942507344523 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103596897155 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521247639282 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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