effects of tourism on developing countries.do you agree or disagree?
These days, there is a controversial debate among people about the impacts of tourism on developing countries. There are a great number of people who interpret the impacts of tourism on developing countries as thoroughly constructive, while others hold an opponent view. I am inclined tourism industry in developing countries is beneficial and should be promoted.
There are several reasons why tourism is advantageous. First of all, it is argued that foster the tourism industry could play a pivotal role in creating adroit people. This is attributed to the fact that such economic plans to attract tourist could improve well-being and prosperity of local habitats and stabilize their economy and career, therefore, they would create a feeling of accomplishment and competence, which consequently open avenues to new achievements so local habitats enthusiasm and determination would be amplified toward many daunting activities. European tourist, for example, even unprivileged regions could be satisfied and stabilize their finance.
In addition, it is claimed that some measures can be taken by governments to stimulate more tourist to visit traditional places. It is to say that tourist industry can address the financial problems, which would instill a strong feeling of self-esteem so local people are more likely to perform up to expectation in society. Specifically, a research conducted by Yale University in 2015 has found that tourist industry could enhance people s economic ability to have a wider range of choices for more affordable commodities.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that tourism enhances efficiency and effectiveness of people evaluation and increase people confidence. It is expected that governments take cognizance of these facts and provide more facilities for diverse type of tourist.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'habitats'' or 'habitat's'?
Suggestion: habitats'; habitat's
...en avenues to new achievements so local habitats enthusiasm and determination would be a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62142857143 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10660093796 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603571428571 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.8038384165 50.4703680194 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.166666667 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116412910503 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05447361712 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625555030563 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078072108691 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766690580268 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 55.0591133005 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
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