The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems…so who do u think should be responsible for solving it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual?
Nowadays global climate change is one of the important topic for all of us as it affects everyone. Some people think that it is increasing due to lack of government policies while other have different opinion that everyone need to extend the efforts to reduce and bring it down to curtain level. Different people have distinct mindset. I am inclined to believe that controlling of global climate change is the joint responsibility of public along with government. Following paragraphs will shed lights on the impact of this global disaster and suggest some improvement to curb them.
First and foremost, global climate change is happening due to emission of greenhouse gases at extensive level. Every person should contribute in the process to reduce the emission of greenhouse gas emission. For instance, if we use public transport or cycle more for our commute instead of personal car and scooter that helps to save our environment. Furthermore, all the manufacturing industries also take necessary steps to bring down the carbon footprints.
Secondly, the government should make such policies that emphasize them on priorities that also contributes to enhances global environment. Since 40th G7 summit the main agenda of discussion was “The Global climate change.” In this round the table meeting every country has shared initiative taken by them towards this global cause. World Bank also extended their help to imply the actions suggested by team by providing funds.
To recapitulate, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that to save nature is everyone’s responsibility, every individuals along with governments jointly put efforts to achieve the desire goal. Further it is expected that people make cognizance of the fact and use them effectively for their betterment in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'enhance'.
Suggestion: enhance
... on priorities that also contributes to enhances global environment. Since 40th G7 summi...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ributes to enhances global environment. Since 40th G7 summit the main agenda of discu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38869257951 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88497670038 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604240282686 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7604797944 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.928571429 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0996601131755 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314721700903 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277325761696 0.071462118173 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589809931432 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017746311684 0.0609392437508 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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