The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems. What are the underlying causes? Who do you think should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual?
Environment is in danger due to lack of control over the many system such as industrialization, vehicle, public transport, excessive uses of natural resources. Everyone is responsible for this. However, government should limit it.
To begin with, the main cause of it is industrialization, as we are aware about, noise, air, ozone layer depletion, carbon dioxide these problem making it worst. Authorities have to take strict action against the violator of rule, which impact on earth. System can control the situation by creating new law's and strong action against the breakers. in linked to implementing new ideas and involving the NGO to save it. Regime need to made some financial arrangement for solution.
Moving to consider the another side, people have to follow new rules which are created to save the world. A relevant example, in 1850's in London around 6 thousand people died due to industrial fog. Obviously something need to done then they made changes in existing law and applied with full force. Another point which I feel is important to point out is that, the ozone layer is decreasing day by day due to huge uses of natural sources which is important factor need to cover. Also need awareness in public to use public transport to save the extra and unwanted burning of fuel.
In conclusion, we can say that it is duty of government, organization and every individual’s duty to save the earth by applying some good habit to us and following rules.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun system seems to be countable; consider using: 'many systems'.
Suggestion: many systems
... danger due to lack of control over the many system such as industrialization, vehicle, pub...
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Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble for this. However, government should limit it. To begin with, the main cau...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
..., ozone layer depletion, carbon dioxide these problem making it worst. Authorities have to ta...
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Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...and strong action against the breakers. in linked to implementing new ideas and in...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1850s'.
Suggestion: in the 1850s
...to save the world. A relevant example, in 1850s in London around 6 thousand people died...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[5]
Message: Did you mean 'do'?
Suggestion: do
...strial fog. Obviously something need to done then they made changes in existing law ...
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Line 5, column 481, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...hich is important factor need to cover. Also need awareness in public to use public ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, then, i feel, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98785425101 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88658005401 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619433198381 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3801945768 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0857132753427 0.242375264174 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267382423568 0.0925447433944 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030460277828 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604645166751 0.151781067708 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038903606301 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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